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Purpose: The objective of this paper is to reveal the comparison and/or contrast between two or more main subjects. For example, students can compare and contrast two restaurants, stores, cars, sports, sports’ teams, bands, actor/actresses, TV shows, video games, books, etc.
A rough draft chart is constructed with 2 main subjects, (5) ______
and at least 3 main categories for comparison/contrast.
(it’s best if you can research by going to the place, ask
other people their opinions of it, or create a scene to show
why or how---instead of just writing “it’s better.”)
A brief outline is turned in with the chart, rough draft and final draft. (5) ______
Three or more categories are organized into a “thesis statement” (5) ______
which lists
them in the order that they are presented in the
paper. Ex: When comparing Burger King and Wendy’s
quality of food, atmosphere, service…(in the order that they
are written in paragraphs about)
The comparison/contrast is full of precise detail, which means it
will be at least 2 typed pages (15) ______
(12 pt. font Times New Roman or Courier, double spaced)
If you cannot think of more to write, then put in another
category or add another subject. You can do 3 restaurants, etc.
Introduction piques interest with a question, interesting fact, etc. (5) ______
Conclusion sums paper up and leaves the reader with food for thought (5) ______
Spelling/Grammar/Neatness (5) ______
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(45) ______
Due Date: ________________________________
Each day late = -15
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CATEGORY
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Introduction/Thesis Statement
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The introduction is inviting, states the main topic and previews the
three main points that will be brought up in a comparison/contrast
fashion.
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The introduction clearly states the main topic and previews the
structure of the paper, but is not particularly inviting to the reader.
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The introduction states the main topic, but does not adequately preview
the structure of the paper through the use of a thesis statement nor is
it particularly inviting to the reader.
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There is no clear introduction of the main topic or structure of the paper.
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Sensory Details
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Relevant, telling, quality details give the reader important
information that goes beyond the obvious and supports the
comparison/contrast.
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Supporting details and information are relevant, but one key topic is unsupported.
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Supporting details and information are relevant, but several key issues of the comparison/contrast are unsupported.
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Supporting details and information are minimal, typically unclear or not related to the topic.
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Word Choice
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Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the
reader's mind, and the choice and placement of the words seems
accurate, natural and not forced.
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Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the
reader's mind, but occasionally the words are used inaccurately or seem
overdone.
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Writer uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety, punch or flair.
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Writer uses a limited vocabulary that does not communicate strongly or capture the reader's interest.
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Organization
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Details are placed in a logical order and the way they are presented effectively keeps the interest of the reader.
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Details are placed in a logical order, but the way in which they are
presented/introduced sometimes makes the writing less interesting.
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Some details are not in a logical or expected order, and this distracts the reader.
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Many details are not in a logical or expected order. There is little sense that the writing is organized.
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Conclusion
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The conclusion is strong and restates the thesis, leaving the reader
with a clear picture of the differences and similarities between the
two topics.
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The conclusion restates the thesis and ties up almost all the loose ends.
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The conclusion is recognizable, but does not tie up several loose ends.
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There is no clear conclusion, the paper just ends.
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Grammar/Neatness/Spelling
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Writer makes no errors in grammar or spelling and no erasure marks that distract the reader from the content.
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Writer makes 1-2 errors in grammar, spelling or neatness that distract the reader from the content.
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Writer makes 3-4 errors in grammar, spelling or neatness that distract the reader from the content.
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Writer makes more than 4 errors in grammar, spelling or neatness that distract the reader from the content.
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